We have now presented our group pitch 'Knockout sport'on the "dying sport of boxing", to the class getting positive feedback. The pitch was successful as the present group members, remi, bobby and curtis, were able to explain even though we where missing one member which was fokhrul islam.
The feed back we got was:
1} shorten extract into 5mins, by focusing on a particualar section
2} end doc with part 1 to show its only part of the doc
3} the idea is liked and that we have found a coach to interview
4} would be a good idea to find and watch young boxers sparring
5} change the title to 'knock out sport'. this is a metaphor which links to our documentary
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